I am doing an exercise Rudolf Flesch’s "The Art of Plain Talk." It’s point is to change as many nouns, infinitives, gerunds, and participles into "active verbs" or finite verbs. I have spent the past hour trying to rewrite a sentence to use finite verbs, but I cannot figure out if my result is actually using finite verbs or just other infinitives.
Here’s the problem sentence:
- The conundrum is whether your unseasonable green-gourd personality is directly related to organic or glandular subnormality – which is staying your physical development more or less at child level – or whether it is, rather, the outpicturing of subconscious stubborn reluctance to grow up and thus take lasting leave of the special prerogatives and adulation you may have enjoyed as a charming child prodigy.
Here is my attempt to make verbs finite:
- I ask myself: Is your development kept at a child’s level by your biology? Or is your subconscious refusing to grow up and abandon the prerogatives and adulations you may have enjoyed as a charming child prodigy?
In the first sentence, "kept" appears to be a past participle and not a finite verb. I have tried rearranging the sentence to say something like "Is your biology keeping you from developing…" but "keeping" appears to be an inifinitive because it doesn’t hint at the actor.
All the examples of finite verbs that I can find online are of statements and not questions.
How do finite verbs work in questions?
In order to understand what Flesch is trying to say, you should first of all realize that grammar isn’t his focus, or even interest. For example, on pp. 71-72, he rewrites
 American belles-lettres also give a much more faithful and adequate picture of the entire civilization to which they belong than literature abroad.
 American belles-lettres picture the entire civilization to which they belong more faithfully and adequately.
Now note that the distinction between  and  is not one of passive vs active voice, nor one of finite vs non-finite verbs. In both, the verbs are finite and in the active voice. Instead, it is about choosing to use picture as a verb rather than as a noun.
Consider next the following segment from the book (pp. 66-67):
The point of all this is, of course, that I am talking here only of those words that are used as verbs in a sentence. They are what the grammarians call the "finite active verb forms" and they are the only ones that have life in them. Hearing of verbs, you probably think of passive participles and infinitives and gerunds and all the other fancy varieties that have plagued your grammar-school days. Well, forget about them: for all practical purposes they are not verbs, but nouns or adjectives—lifeless words that won’t make your sentences move. The verbs want to use are those that are in active business doing verb work; if you use a verb in the passive voice or make a participle or noun out of it, you have lost the most valuable part in the process: it’s like cooking vegetables and throwing away the water with all the vitamins in it.
Note that although he used some grammatical terms, he immediately told you to forget about them! Which is just as well: as John Lawler implied in the comments, Flesch didn’t actually seem to understand grammar all that well.
So one should not get hung up on non-fnite verb forms. In particular, I would say that Flesch is not advocating a ban (or, rather, avoidance) of e.g. the continuous tenses. The sentence
 I am running.
is as ‘active’ (according to—I would say—Flesch’s definition) as it can be, despite the fact that it contains the present participle running (which is needed to form the present continuous tense).
So while knowledge of grammatical terms is helpful when trying to implement Flesch’s recommendations, these recommendations are not reducible to the avoidance of certain inflectional verb forms.
Now let’s consider your sentence
 Is your biology keeping you from developing?
(One slight correction to what you said in your post: keeping isn’t an infinitive, but a present participle.)
The ‘canonical’ counterpart to  is
 Your biology is keeping you from developing.
That is an active-voice sentence, in the present continuous tense. In both cases, the active verb is the auxiliary is, while the complement keeping is a non-finite verb form. But Flesch would not condemn either  or . They are both ‘active’ in his sense of that word.
It is a matter of English grammar that all closed interrogative clauses (i.e. those that invite a yes or no answer) must feature subject-auxiliary inversion; if there is no auxiliary verb, then do is used (that’s called ‘do-support’). In both cases, the lexical verb appears in a non-finite construction, even if it was finite in the canonical (i.e. declarative) counterpart. So, for example, I kept it hidden becomes Did I keep it hidden?
But, again, this sort of non-finiteness is not what Flesch is objecting to.
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