How should I say something like this?
The system I designed can remember the order of messages.
I think that remember doesn’t suit this sentence. What word should I use?
Answer
The problem many people have is keeping sentences like this direct and to the point, without a lot of meaningless “fluff”. Simple, direct minimalism, especially in technical documentation, is a good thing.
To that end, I like this one:
The system I designed can maintain the order of the messages…
Direct and to the point.
Attribution
Source : Link , Question Author : aghArdeshir , Answer Author : AWT
