Is this sentence correct and understandable [closed]

The message shown when X Button is clicked on Y Page, has been changed
to “Z”.

There is a page Y.
There is a button X on page Y.
There was a message appears when the button was clicked.
The text of the messaged was changed to text “Z”.

Answer

In the sentence

The message shown when X Button is clicked on Y Page, has been changed to “Z”.

the comma separates two incomplete thoughts. Simply removing the comma clears the sentence up.

The message shown when X Button is clicked on Y Page has been changed to “Z”.

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