Usage of “More concrete” at the beginning of a sentence

by

I was wondering if I can use “More concrete,…” at the beginning of a sentence in order to specify a general statement.

So for instance:

The company does not really perform well.
More concrete, the market share of the company dropped by 30%.

Is there another term that I can use instead or is it fine to use it?

Answer

You could write it like this:

The company does not really perform well.

To put it more concretely, the market share of the company dropped
by 30%.

“Concretely” is an adverb modifying “put.” You could omit “To put it” if you wanted.

Attribution
Source : Link , Question Author : maxeh , Answer Author : Evan

Leave a Comment