I was studying about the uses of that where I stumbled upon this common mistake pertinent to the use of ‘that’.
For e.g:
The goalkeeper blocked two penalty kicks in the second half, and that made his team win the match.
This usage of that is wrong as ‘that’ can’t refer to an action, such as blocking penalty kicks.
But the same resource says that the following example is correct.
Cicero lampooned Mark Antony in a series of orations, the Philippics and Antony later used that as the excuse to execute him.
The site mentions that here ‘that’ refers to ‘ a series’ and not the lampooning.
Query #1. Can ‘which’ (which is also used to refer to a whole clause or sentence) be used in the first sentence?
Query #2. Though the writer says that in the Cicero’s example, ‘that’ is referring to ‘ a series’ but it appears to me that ‘that’ is referring to the ‘lampooning’. How can we correctly resolve such problems (in such questions)?
The site referred to as the resource here is :https://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/gmat-sentence-correction-the-many-uses-of-that/
Answer
Query #1. Can ‘which’ (which is also used to refer to a whole clause
or sentence) be used in the first sentence?
Traditionally, “that” is a restrictive pronoun, while “which” is a non-restrictive pronoun.
For example:
- Ghosts that wail scare me. (In other words, I’m scared by wailing ghosts—but I might be okay with quiet ghosts.)
- Ghosts, which wail, scare me. (In other words, I’m scared by ghosts. Incidentally, ghosts wail.)
Although some people will use them interchangeably in some situations, it’s more common to make a distinction between the two.
However, if you were to replace “and that” with “which” in the first sentence (it’s important that “and” is not left), some people might whine about it—but nobody would misunderstand the meaning. Whether it would actually be grammatically correct (from a strictly technical point of view) would depend on which school of grammar you follow.
Also, I completely disagree with the source that says a pronoun cannot refer to an action:
“I like to eat breakfast for dinner.”
“Oh, I like doing that too!”
Query #2. Though the writer says that in the Cicero’s example, ‘that’
is referring to ‘ a series’ but it appears to me that ‘that’ is
referring to the ‘lampooning’. How can we correctly resolve such
problems (in such questions)?
Personally, I agree that it refers to the “lampooning.” However, if you want to avoid any possible confusion, the best method of doing so is to clarify or rephrase.
- Cicero lampooned Mark Antony in a series of orations. The Philippics and Antony later used the lampooning as the excuse to execute him.
Note: I also corrected the use of the comma, which was ungrammatical.]
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Source : Link , Question Author : The NOVICE , Answer Author : Jason Bassford