“Adding motion” usage in sentence/slogan

english is not my tongue language and I am working on a new viral content website, where I am trying to come up with slogan.
Would be correct to say: “Adding motion to your daily boredom”

Answer

I agree that the “adding to” phrasing doesn’t make much sense.

How about “Moving you through your daily boredom” instead? It retains the “motion” concept but sounds more natural to me.

You could explore synonyms to both “moving” as well. “Propelling” or “Driving” are also strong active verbs that share the transportation theme.

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