I am having following constructions
- my supervisor strongly recommend for an extension.
- I would like to apply for one year extension period.
- I have been granted a scholarship.
Would the following sentence be a way to write the previous sentence in a single sentence?
Therefore, with my supervisor’s strong recommendation, I would like to apply for one year extension period for my scholarship that I have been granted.
Answer
Why are you beginning your sentence with Therefore? I would just write the sentence thus:
Given my supervisor’s strong recommendation, I would like to apply for one year extension period for my scholarship.
It is not necessary to state that the scholarship has been granted – the word extension already indicates this.
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Source : Link , Question Author : gnp , Answer Author : Matt
