I am writing a thesis and want to emphasis the second point I make when presenting two arguments.
Second, importantly technology induced employment falls are not the result of an industry declining.
So importantly refers to the point I am making. The sentence seems weird to me. Shall I put the comma before or after importantly or is something else wrong here?
Answer
The easiest way seems to me to say
Second, and importantly, technology-induced employment falls…
This makes more of "importantly" while still allowing the list-based "Second".
[Note that the compound adjective describing falls in employment needs a hyphen.]
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Source : Link , Question Author : ArOk , Answer Author : Andrew Leach
